The fact that you made this in just two months and it's already better than most titles in the 3D NTR genre is genuinely impressive. With more polish and content, this could become one of those games NTR fans mention in every discussion.
Some of my personal recommendations:
1. More characters. As others have said, more people would benefit this greatly. One of the stream options is an old bully. Have him fall for our childhood friend. Stalkers, Pushy IRL fans, another childhood friend? Even if they don't have full routes like the landlord, having more miscellaneous events would go a long way.
2. More control over influence. We can almost egg on the Landlord to try and take our childhood friend. With the messaging system I would love it if we could either steer her into his (or others) arms, or simply make them think she is interested, leading to them thinking she is playing hard to get and get pushy. What really sold this for me was the Landlord mast scene. If you simply go along and agree he says something along the lines of "You're not very protective of her." That could be the perfect flag for him to start moving on her without needing a missed payment and start us having to fight over her attention while also helping her stream.
3. New locations and date maps. Combining ideas from points 1 and 4, what about new places to take her like bars where she could get too drunk, alleys where you might run into thugs, or simply different places to spot her out with someone else? Even VN-style date events would be great. These could build or break your bond, win favor with others, or push NTR opportunities.
4. Build the emotional bond. NTR hits hardest when there’s a real connection to the girl. Movie nights at her place to talk, reminiscing on old times, more dates, subtly pushing her into others arms through talk. These could be used to either deepen the relationship or subtly push her away depending on your choices. Let me care about this girl before I lose her.
5. Lewd Stream/Record. Would love to see her slowly convinced either by us or her fans to do more suggestive streams. Start light: yoga, poolside, or onsen content. Then slowly escalate. Eventually, let us produce porn videos and run a separate site for it. Choose positions, people, setting, etc.
6. Pregnancy. I know. But I would love an actual mechanic to this later on. This is mostly a personal wish and not really needed for the game to thrive.
I wish you the absolute best and I’ll definitely be supporting this and any other projects you make.
I just want to second most of what OfficerBrads has already suggested.
I'd just like to add that maybe she could have an individual corruption meter separate from any one person's relationships. This could increase from a direct result of fan comments and not banning or deleting lewd comments which could unlock certain stream types as well as the outfits she normally wears both on and off stream.
Honestly, sometimes it feels like a bunch of people on occasion collectively have a hivemind brainwave and come up with the same idea. This is literally an idea I've been planning for a while and posted about this on my roadmap on Patreon (it's a free public post, please read it). It's so cool that multiple people can converge on similar ideas.
Hey there! Sorry about replying so late. Well technically I think it has been 5 months now since I started the development and around 3 months since I uploaded it here.
Before you read, I'd like you to take a look at the free public post on my Patreon for the roadmap that I have planned for this particular game it has a ton of details that you might find interesting.
1. It is planned but not for more than 2 additional characters. I want this particular game to be simple. BUT I have plans to add multiple characters for my next game, each of which will be a different archetype.
2. Yeah I recently added 2 scenes that have this kinda dialogue plus I've added a messaging system where you can reply to the landlord. More in the future.
3. New maps. The issue with public locations is NPCs. Adding npcs requires models and that's hard to do. I do love the idea of a bar and an alley tho. I've added it to my ideas list!
4. This is where I think I fail a little. My dialogue writing isn't particularly great and sometimes I wish I had a dialogue writer. I do want to create that familiarity and affection towards her using silly moments, cute dialogue etc. Plus I want the FMC in my next game to have a much slower fall into depravity.
5. Yes this will part of the corruption update I'm planning. It's a separate state from her affection towards the player or landlord and not deleting pervy comments will increase corruption.
6. Pregnancy can only be added at certain points in story in my opinion (usually towards the end) especially for a linear game like this. For more of a hack/slash or fighting or RPG game, it could happen at any point.
Thank you so much for playing the game and the kind words. I appreciate it I hope to polish this game to be better before I take on the next project!
Hello! I was wondering, if there's an increase in NTR content in the future, could a "Hide NTR Events" button be added? I think this could make it more acceptable to a wider audience :)
What I mean is, assuming your game will add more NTR content in the future, would this particular function be included? I apologize if the original message was unclear due to machine translation.
I'm so sorry about replying so late to you. I'm a little confused. If you can explain to me how the NTR events would be hidden it would help me understand better.
I started playing this due to the streaming concept(i'm interested in a corruption streaming game), but I have to say the way I interact with the game needs MAJOR improvement, I only managed to play a short while before getting tired of it
1. UI in the PC- a lot of the buttons are small and out of the way, and certain things like unlocks are not clear(like the streaming select music and all that, plus the fact I need to scroll down to press next every day is unnecessary).
The fact I need to constantly swap between tabs is quite annoying as well(put the important stuff together and make it bigger). I feel like I will go crazy watching the remote work bar go, and I still have no idea what it does as there is no money. Selecting a game in the stream list is annoying to spam click and I gave up selecting, perhaps having a scrollable list would be better if there is a lot of choices. (for the steam music and all that selection, make a sideways list with the details in square buttons so I can also easily tell what's unlocked).
the close pc button is dangerously close to the button to close the game if you play windowed.
2. the first person stuff - considering majority of the gameplay is in the PC (my current day is Schedule stream> work for some reason> sleep) it is extremely annoying to need to move to interact with the pc, get kicked out after work facing the fan for some reason (or not if the guy needs to go out and manually exit) then rotate to sleep. I recommend starting the day already on the PC(on the stream page), and having a quick sleep button inside. Make the main part the PC, and then have a button to close the PC and explore the outside as it is the "side content".
3. The world- first of all the door annoyingly smacks into me whenever I open it (worse case scenario swap to a sliding door or just let it clip past me).
Currently parts feel very unnecessary, like I do not know what to do with the world, there's so many identical locked doors. I only found the windows when double checking to write this review. Please add indicators to points of interest (like having name boards or some customization of the rooms) or just straight up remove the unnecessary parts of the map. I understand adding the doors for realism but sometimes a game just needs to have what's interesting. Currently, if I close my own door I have trouble finding my own house due to how bland the map is with the extra doors.
I have not seen anything interesting outside yet and I read the game loop that suggests that I can go out and see what the girl is up to, I suggest having an indicator so I know when to actually explore, do not expect players to spend time mindlessly patrolling the outside.
One idea I have that can fix it is to change the map to have the player's window face the girl's window or have some cctv that can see a glimpse of the window or something, so I know when she's not home or something is up.
and please add like a window something like a translucent material on the top half of the door so I know there's someone in front of it.
the main point I'm making is that there are a lot of mindless unnecessary movements simply padding the game (also remember these kind of games are better if they have one handed controls), waiting 5 seconds for remote work, using 2 seconds to rotate and taking a step to use the pc or sleep, spending 20 seconds patrolling the outside, all these might seem small, but doing them over and over and over and over again makes them very annoying chores that could have been skipped.
4. personal suggestions (this is more biased feel free to ignore) I don't know if you're going to change the game or make this another game, I like the streaming concept you did and I would love to see it expanded and focused on, I suggest making each aspect of the stream more meaningful to the result(like instead of the genre of the game you can have modifiers like 'wholesome' and 'interaction with viewers') , like sponsors also effect how she's seen in her community and that you can corrupt her through adjusting the direction bit by bit. (in the case of a different story, she can get corrupted enough to take private requests from the landlord/viewers to pay for rent, my current gripe with the game right now is that her corruption and streaming feels disconnected with each other, it's just steaming hard to make money, and the corrupt land lord story on the side.
All valid suggestions and I will try to work on these as I polish the game in the future. Thank you playing and the very useful feedback though. I do appreciate it. About the 'window close' button being too close to the app close window, you can simply press the escape key. But I will see what I can do about that.
Hope to see the polished product! Also I just realised I made a typo (I said "these kind of games are better with on handed controls" when I meant "one handed controls"). Good luck with polishing the game!
I understand. Sorry about the late reply, I've been quite busy. The issue with one handed controls is that a 3D game requires both hands for movement and rotation. For pure one handed gameplay, it's better to play visual novels IMO.
The late reply is understandable. the walking part makes sense with two handed controls, it's more of the computer-sleep loop that could work with one hand better (easier way to close without esc, and not needing to move , then interact with the bed with e just to sleep) this loops back to my suggestion about the 3d walking being the "side" gameplay while the computer-sleep loop is the "main" game.
but yeah there's no way around first person walking apart from some weird optional thing like using the mouse wheel as "cruise controls" to walk forward at a fixed speed since you can steer with the camera. Or something like numpad/numbers quick traveling to fixed POI's after unlocking them.
But being able to click as an alternative to 'e' (basically have alternate inputs for the same action) can help reduce the need for splitting the input between hands. Not asking to change controls, but more of having some weird but functional alternative to steer towards one hand gameplay alongside standard controls can help alleviate the problems faced by the genre combination(or h game and first person), especially when the movement doesn't need extreme precision or speed like a shooter does.
thanks for reading all my ranting and replying to it.
I just got some idea for an alternative for the window/cctv thing. You can just convert the messenger tab to something on the side of the screen (or somewhere always visible no matter the tab) that you tap to open up the messages with her. Then you can use something like discord's statuses (Online = she's home, Busy = streaming, away/custom sleeping status = sleeping, on mobile = she's outside your house (maybe she messages you to open the door too), then when she's offline or something you know something is wrong.
Could also be vague at first to not explain what she's doing(like when shes home it's online, busy or away, with a few mystery ones being under offline or away or busy(like she could be away, offline or do not disturb when she's doing sussy stuff). Then you can buy upgrades to make that notification more specific to remove the overlap, something like telling her to put more custom statuses for her community (eg. sleeping, streaming. etc) so some of the ones like offline become exclusive to corruption scenes
I am planning for my next game and I do have a similar messaging idea in mind using a phone. I think online and offline stuff work better when you don't live close to her. But yeah decent ideas that I've added to my suggestions list on obsidian for this or future games.
Not yet, sorry. I will try to make one in the future but for now it would be way too much effort. You could try using an emulator and see if that works.
Hey, this is a great game so far, probably my second favorite in the NTR genre - - I have a few suggestions that you may or may not have considered though!
1. I would really like to see a regression in the dialogue, as well as the facial expressions for the girl the more corrupted she becomes with the landlord; making her more apathetic toward the MC the more she cheats on him.
2. Following that, I'd love to see more facial expressions for both the girl and the landlord, right now they're very soul-less.
3. Following the first suggestion, changing the girls outfits/hairstyle the more she's corrupted (removing her glasses, making her wear much more skimpy outfits, make her grow out her hair, etc).
4. Small suggestion, but adding illustrations to the streams instead of having a black page with comments would be a nice touch.
Either way, love it so far, and I really hope you add #1 & #3, those would make this game so much more immersive.
Hello I like those ideas and progressive visual corruption has been suggested before but I need specific ideas for those. I will add more facial expressions as I polish the project more. About #4, I've added exactly that in the latest Patreon release (I'm sure you've realised by now).
Thank you so much for the kind words. May I ask which game is your favourite in the genre? (Totally not asking so I can grab ideas lol)
My favorite in the genre is Turning The Page, it's a VN and it has elements that I suggested here. The girl changes her look/attitude toward the MC over time and it really adds a layer.
Also, off topic to this last post, but I ran into a performance bug with the latest release the other night I tried it out. Not sure what exactly is causing it, but after the introduction my FPS tanks hard until the first Saturday when your GF/Best Friend comes over to invite you for coffee.
I'm running a 1080ti/5700x, and my FPS goes from 120~ to around 45 and stays there until something fixes the lag, and changing visual settings does not fix it. If I had to guess, the lag is very similar to what I've experienced when assets are too far outside of bounds (floating point error), but that's a very wild guess on my part! Either way, hope you fix the lag.
Can you please gimme more info over on patreon about the bug? I think I can kinda guess what's causing it. Is it when you open and close the character sheet?
Game pretty short, need another dude, maybe black men? For new ending, and need add some other things, for example buy new bed, sofa, tv and etc for MC house. Maybe add spy camera? Because even when windows open in landlord room, you can't watch from different perspective. I want scene where mc watch and fap or even cuck end. Maybe add possibility buy her costumes? And she use some in ntr and vanilla scenes.
Hello, thanks for the comment. Cameras will come later. Additional props, maybe. I would classify that as low priority for now. I will definitely take your other ideas into consideration, thank you!
So the game crashed when I tried playing it at first, fixed that thanks to a previous comment. now, though, for some reason everything is way brighter than any of the preview images. Like, the girl is straight up too bright for me to see her body and I'm not sure why. This is the only game I've had this problem with.
I'm sorry that's happening. The crashing issue happens if a GPU doesn't support vulkan. Which GPU are you using? Are your drivers up to date? The opengl version is just a fallback and the game probably doesn't look great in that mode.
Hola, queria saber que truco usan los demas para ganar dinero de forma facil, llevo 6 semanas en el juego y apenas tengo 2k y sigo sin poder pagar la renta, la verdad es que no se que hacer para ganar mas dinero, no le agarro el truco. He gastado el dinero en mejorar la carisma del personaje y todo eso y siento que pierdo mas dinero debes de ganar. Algun consejo? Y tambien queria sugerir de meter a mas chicas dentro del juego y aprovechar los demas departamentos vacios, como por ejemplo meter una que sea streamer famosa y tenga la opcion de ayudar a la amiga, y puedas tambien hacerlo con ella. O tambien meter una tienda y haya una chica ahi que al igual que las demas chicas puedas progresar con esta. y Tambien agregar algun trio con estas.
To make money more easily, you have to select the sponsors every time they're available. These are under in the streaming website dashboard under the sponsors tab. These come after 1 week or so into the game, don't waste your money on upgrades until later when you have some saved up.
I will take your other suggestions into consideration, thank you :)
He jugado este juego desde el principio y más Qué cantidad le falta variedad creo que ya va siendo hora de poner un tercer personaje Como una excompañera de trabajo que viene de vez en cuando en ejemplo los miércoles qué son los días más tediosos de pasar de la semana y a veces te queda exceso de dinero y no sabes qué hacer con el es una sugerencia pero deberías hacer que el personaje venga los miércoles Con la excusa de ayudar pero solo es para verlo y ayuda al protagonista con el mantenimiento de los apartamentos Cómo sacar la basura y limpiar el suelo y para gastar el exceso de dinero con herramientas extras que ayudan mejor con la limpieza y dependiendo de qué tan bien o mal limpie el casero se la lleva a la parte de atrás del edificio para que lo *ayude* con el trabajo de mantenimiento que falta y así también se le da uso a la ventana del cuarto del protagonista Haciendo que los basureros que bloquean la entrada a peces estén ahí y a veces no y para que no se sienta tan monótono deberías poner un ciclo de día tarde y noche, día hacer el trabajo ,tarde ayudar con el edificio noche exploración
So i download this game but it's not working for me when i try running the game it just show a transparent window then it close, either it's not compatible with my laptop or i need to do something to make it run but I'm not too sure
Hello, I think I missed this comment, so sorry about that. I think this is a result of your GPU possibly not supporting vulcan. Could you start the game with the following arguments: '--rendering-driver opengl3'
It's 550 at first but if you keep missing, it goes down to 450 per week. It adds up if you keep missing rent, make sure you try talking to the landlord each saturday AFTER she moves in(so you only have to pay from week 2 onwards), it's explained in the tutorial and in dialogue. Actually maybe I should implement a notification with the amount so it's easier to understand. Will be done in the next update!
Hey there! This is something I'd have to test extensively before releasing so it will probably happen after I've added major updates to the game. So maybe at some point in the coming months? If there's interest, I'll definitely expedite the process tho.
First up the ugly bastard scenes are more interesting/hotter then the MC and the girl scenes lol.
Second up the (spoilers) the bad ending gets her pregnant but the good ending points to the fact that the ugly bastard route is set in stone and that she'll fall into corruption either way?
Third up setting up what game and all that to play is pointless, so is spending more money on making the stream better as if you leave it on minimum and rando game you'll always have enough especially with the sponserships.
I get this is super early so things are placeholder and just not even there but I'll have to come back in like years at this point to see how this game has progressed. I will say you have a decent groundwork setup though and all the best.
Hey there I appreciate the feedback! The good ending text has been slightly edited to change appropriately based on what level of affection she had with the landlord. You're probably right about the economics and I need to balance that aspect of the game, thanks again!
Looking into this. And I did see your message on Patreon but I couldn't reply until now. Support helped me get the page back up so it's fixed now so I will reply in a few minutes!
Oh, right! There was one time when it was saturday, I had already missed rent couple times by that point (the rent was 450$) and landlord just straight up told me that I didn't have enough cash when there was actually more than needed.
Also, pretty sure a lot of money-related stuff doesn't work properly.
Courses seem to be completely free despite pricetag of 100$.
how am i ment to start? after talking to the landlord i cant figure out what to do. cant sleep, cant open doors and cant click anything on the computer. im playing the 1.02 version
Edit: Support helped me fix it! Page is back up now.
Yeh, I think their age verification uses AI or something and it doesn't trust that I'm 18 even though I showed my govt ID. it's kinda ridiculous because it won't even let me redo it, I'm awaiting a reply from support.
Your game is very cool, the story is really gripping I have rarely seen a game of this type with such good gameplay bravo to you for this work some improvements to make but seen as seen you are active in terms of updates I am sure that this game will become a classic. I just have one question, are the 3D models taken from VroidStudio?
Not bad, some good decisions, a lot of underdeveloped ones, clunky, a bit tedious but short and cute, left me with good feeling of your author-potential. Some critical points that I've got:
1) My gosh there should be a notification like "HEY! IT'S SATURDAY! PAY UP OR ELSE...". It's so easy to just lose track of weekdays since you're always in a loop of schedule a video->buy stuff->work->sleep->repeat, there's nothing to do otherwise anyway.
2) You plan to add more comments? Do they even matter? As of now there's almost 0 incentive to look at them.
3) Some basic dialogues for day-to-day interactions could be nice. Like you come to her place but she just ignores you, some friend she is!
4) You talk about her career (it's main gameplay, mind you!) exactly 2 times: in the beginning and when sponsorships become available. After that... So long and thanks for the fish I guess?
Overall it's not too bad for your first public game, but I feel like there's almost no reason to actually adress any of my points (except 1st one maybe? Should be pretty easy to do). You can spend enormous amounts of time polishing it, but I highly doubt there's a room for your creation to be something bigget than what it already is. My IMHO - just move on to the next thing, I'm pretty sure you can make it much better. Also, big up for making 3D eroge! Really excited to see what you and Acestudio will come up with in the future.
I appreciate the comment, friend! The first one has been added to a bugfix that I will release tomorrow. Day to day interactions are actually planned. About point 4, yah I really need to work on the dialogues and immersion. I do plan to add another character for an additional ending in game but that's for the future. And yes! I'd love to work on a different kinda game!
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The fact that you made this in just two months and it's already better than most titles in the 3D NTR genre is genuinely impressive. With more polish and content, this could become one of those games NTR fans mention in every discussion.
Some of my personal recommendations:
1. More characters.
As others have said, more people would benefit this greatly. One of the stream options is an old bully. Have him fall for our childhood friend. Stalkers, Pushy IRL fans, another childhood friend? Even if they don't have full routes like the landlord, having more miscellaneous events would go a long way.
2. More control over influence.
We can almost egg on the Landlord to try and take our childhood friend. With the messaging system I would love it if we could either steer her into his (or others) arms, or simply make them think she is interested, leading to them thinking she is playing hard to get and get pushy. What really sold this for me was the Landlord mast scene. If you simply go along and agree he says something along the lines of "You're not very protective of her." That could be the perfect flag for him to start moving on her without needing a missed payment and start us having to fight over her attention while also helping her stream.
3. New locations and date maps.
Combining ideas from points 1 and 4, what about new places to take her like bars where she could get too drunk, alleys where you might run into thugs, or simply different places to spot her out with someone else? Even VN-style date events would be great. These could build or break your bond, win favor with others, or push NTR opportunities.
4. Build the emotional bond.
NTR hits hardest when there’s a real connection to the girl. Movie nights at her place to talk, reminiscing on old times, more dates, subtly pushing her into others arms through talk. These could be used to either deepen the relationship or subtly push her away depending on your choices. Let me care about this girl before I lose her.
5. Lewd Stream/Record.
Would love to see her slowly convinced either by us or her fans to do more suggestive streams. Start light: yoga, poolside, or onsen content. Then slowly escalate. Eventually, let us produce porn videos and run a separate site for it. Choose positions, people, setting, etc.
6. Pregnancy.
I know. But I would love an actual mechanic to this later on. This is mostly a personal wish and not really needed for the game to thrive.
I wish you the absolute best and I’ll definitely be supporting this and any other projects you make.
I just want to second most of what OfficerBrads has already suggested.
I'd just like to add that maybe she could have an individual corruption meter separate from any one person's relationships. This could increase from a direct result of fan comments and not banning or deleting lewd comments which could unlock certain stream types as well as the outfits she normally wears both on and off stream.
Sorry about the late reply.
Honestly, sometimes it feels like a bunch of people on occasion collectively have a hivemind brainwave and come up with the same idea. This is literally an idea I've been planning for a while and posted about this on my roadmap on Patreon (it's a free public post, please read it). It's so cool that multiple people can converge on similar ideas.
I appreciate the suggestions and comment!
Hey there! Sorry about replying so late. Well technically I think it has been 5 months now since I started the development and around 3 months since I uploaded it here.
Before you read, I'd like you to take a look at the free public post on my Patreon for the roadmap that I have planned for this particular game it has a ton of details that you might find interesting.
1. It is planned but not for more than 2 additional characters. I want this particular game to be simple. BUT I have plans to add multiple characters for my next game, each of which will be a different archetype.
2. Yeah I recently added 2 scenes that have this kinda dialogue plus I've added a messaging system where you can reply to the landlord. More in the future.
3. New maps. The issue with public locations is NPCs. Adding npcs requires models and that's hard to do. I do love the idea of a bar and an alley tho. I've added it to my ideas list!
4. This is where I think I fail a little. My dialogue writing isn't particularly great and sometimes I wish I had a dialogue writer. I do want to create that familiarity and affection towards her using silly moments, cute dialogue etc. Plus I want the FMC in my next game to have a much slower fall into depravity.
5. Yes this will part of the corruption update I'm planning. It's a separate state from her affection towards the player or landlord and not deleting pervy comments will increase corruption.
6. Pregnancy can only be added at certain points in story in my opinion (usually towards the end) especially for a linear game like this. For more of a hack/slash or fighting or RPG game, it could happen at any point.
Thank you so much for playing the game and the kind words. I appreciate it I hope to polish this game to be better before I take on the next project!
Hello! I was wondering, if there's an increase in NTR content in the future, could a "Hide NTR Events" button be added? I think this could make it more acceptable to a wider audience :)
Could you explain what you mean by hide? A button to disable NTR? No NTR scenes should occur if you help pay the rent on time.
What I mean is, assuming your game will add more NTR content in the future, would this particular function be included? I apologize if the original message was unclear due to machine translation.
I'm so sorry about replying so late to you. I'm a little confused. If you can explain to me how the NTR events would be hidden it would help me understand better.
I started playing this due to the streaming concept(i'm interested in a corruption streaming game), but I have to say the way I interact with the game needs MAJOR improvement, I only managed to play a short while before getting tired of it
1. UI in the PC-
a lot of the buttons are small and out of the way, and certain things like unlocks are not clear(like the streaming select music and all that, plus the fact I need to scroll down to press next every day is unnecessary).
The fact I need to constantly swap between tabs is quite annoying as well(put the important stuff together and make it bigger). I feel like I will go crazy watching the remote work bar go, and I still have no idea what it does as there is no money. Selecting a game in the stream list is annoying to spam click and I gave up selecting, perhaps having a scrollable list would be better if there is a lot of choices. (for the steam music and all that selection, make a sideways list with the details in square buttons so I can also easily tell what's unlocked).
the close pc button is dangerously close to the button to close the game if you play windowed.
2. the first person stuff - considering majority of the gameplay is in the PC (my current day is Schedule stream> work for some reason> sleep) it is extremely annoying to need to move to interact with the pc, get kicked out after work facing the fan for some reason (or not if the guy needs to go out and manually exit) then rotate to sleep. I recommend starting the day already on the PC(on the stream page), and having a quick sleep button inside. Make the main part the PC, and then have a button to close the PC and explore the outside as it is the "side content".
3. The world-
first of all the door annoyingly smacks into me whenever I open it (worse case scenario swap to a sliding door or just let it clip past me).
Currently parts feel very unnecessary, like I do not know what to do with the world, there's so many identical locked doors. I only found the windows when double checking to write this review. Please add indicators to points of interest (like having name boards or some customization of the rooms) or just straight up remove the unnecessary parts of the map. I understand adding the doors for realism but sometimes a game just needs to have what's interesting. Currently, if I close my own door I have trouble finding my own house due to how bland the map is with the extra doors.
I have not seen anything interesting outside yet and I read the game loop that suggests that I can go out and see what the girl is up to, I suggest having an indicator so I know when to actually explore, do not expect players to spend time mindlessly patrolling the outside.
One idea I have that can fix it is to change the map to have the player's window face the girl's window or have some cctv that can see a glimpse of the window or something, so I know when she's not home or something is up.
and please add like a window something like a translucent material on the top half of the door so I know there's someone in front of it.
the main point I'm making is that there are a lot of mindless unnecessary movements simply padding the game (also remember these kind of games are better if they have one handed controls), waiting 5 seconds for remote work, using 2 seconds to rotate and taking a step to use the pc or sleep, spending 20 seconds patrolling the outside, all these might seem small, but doing them over and over and over and over again makes them very annoying chores that could have been skipped.
4. personal suggestions (this is more biased feel free to ignore)
I don't know if you're going to change the game or make this another game, I like the streaming concept you did and I would love to see it expanded and focused on, I suggest making each aspect of the stream more meaningful to the result(like instead of the genre of the game you can have modifiers like 'wholesome' and 'interaction with viewers') , like sponsors also effect how she's seen in her community and that you can corrupt her through adjusting the direction bit by bit. (in the case of a different story, she can get corrupted enough to take private requests from the landlord/viewers to pay for rent, my current gripe with the game right now is that her corruption and streaming feels disconnected with each other, it's just steaming hard to make money, and the corrupt land lord story on the side.
Hope to see the project improve
All valid suggestions and I will try to work on these as I polish the game in the future. Thank you playing and the very useful feedback though. I do appreciate it.
About the 'window close' button being too close to the app close window, you can simply press the escape key. But I will see what I can do about that.
Hope to see the polished product! Also I just realised I made a typo (I said "these kind of games are better with on handed controls" when I meant "one handed controls"). Good luck with polishing the game!
I understand. Sorry about the late reply, I've been quite busy. The issue with one handed controls is that a 3D game requires both hands for movement and rotation. For pure one handed gameplay, it's better to play visual novels IMO.
The late reply is understandable.
the walking part makes sense with two handed controls, it's more of the computer-sleep loop that could work with one hand better (easier way to close without esc, and not needing to move , then interact with the bed with e just to sleep)
this loops back to my suggestion about the 3d walking being the "side" gameplay while the computer-sleep loop is the "main" game.
but yeah there's no way around first person walking apart from some weird optional thing like using the mouse wheel as "cruise controls" to walk forward at a fixed speed since you can steer with the camera. Or something like numpad/numbers quick traveling to fixed POI's after unlocking them.
But being able to click as an alternative to 'e' (basically have alternate inputs for the same action) can help reduce the need for splitting the input between hands. Not asking to change controls, but more of having some weird but functional alternative to steer towards one hand gameplay alongside standard controls can help alleviate the problems faced by the genre combination(or h game and first person), especially when the movement doesn't need extreme precision or speed like a shooter does.
thanks for reading all my ranting and replying to it.
I just got some idea for an alternative for the window/cctv thing. You can just convert the messenger tab to something on the side of the screen (or somewhere always visible no matter the tab) that you tap to open up the messages with her. Then you can use something like discord's statuses (Online = she's home, Busy = streaming, away/custom sleeping status = sleeping, on mobile = she's outside your house (maybe she messages you to open the door too), then when she's offline or something you know something is wrong.
Could also be vague at first to not explain what she's doing(like when shes home it's online, busy or away, with a few mystery ones being under offline or away or busy(like she could be away, offline or do not disturb when she's doing sussy stuff). Then you can buy upgrades to make that notification more specific to remove the overlap, something like telling her to put more custom statuses for her community (eg. sleeping, streaming. etc) so some of the ones like offline become exclusive to corruption scenes
I am planning for my next game and I do have a similar messaging idea in mind using a phone. I think online and offline stuff work better when you don't live close to her. But yeah decent ideas that I've added to my suggestions list on obsidian for this or future games.
Any ver. for android?
Not yet, sorry. I will try to make one in the future but for now it would be way too much effort. You could try using an emulator and see if that works.
Yes, I tried with winlator but the screen resolution makes the buttons appear off screen :(
You could change the screen res in the settings. Does that not work?
Hey, this is a great game so far, probably my second favorite in the NTR genre - - I have a few suggestions that you may or may not have considered though!
1. I would really like to see a regression in the dialogue, as well as the facial expressions for the girl the more corrupted she becomes with the landlord; making her more apathetic toward the MC the more she cheats on him.
2. Following that, I'd love to see more facial expressions for both the girl and the landlord, right now they're very soul-less.
3. Following the first suggestion, changing the girls outfits/hairstyle the more she's corrupted (removing her glasses, making her wear much more skimpy outfits, make her grow out her hair, etc).
4. Small suggestion, but adding illustrations to the streams instead of having a black page with comments would be a nice touch.
Either way, love it so far, and I really hope you add #1 & #3, those would make this game so much more immersive.
Hello I like those ideas and progressive visual corruption has been suggested before but I need specific ideas for those.
I will add more facial expressions as I polish the project more.
About #4, I've added exactly that in the latest Patreon release (I'm sure you've realised by now).
Thank you so much for the kind words. May I ask which game is your favourite in the genre? (Totally not asking so I can grab ideas lol)
My favorite in the genre is Turning The Page, it's a VN and it has elements that I suggested here. The girl changes her look/attitude toward the MC over time and it really adds a layer.
Also, off topic to this last post, but I ran into a performance bug with the latest release the other night I tried it out. Not sure what exactly is causing it, but after the introduction my FPS tanks hard until the first Saturday when your GF/Best Friend comes over to invite you for coffee.
I'm running a 1080ti/5700x, and my FPS goes from 120~ to around 45 and stays there until something fixes the lag, and changing visual settings does not fix it. If I had to guess, the lag is very similar to what I've experienced when assets are too far outside of bounds (floating point error), but that's a very wild guess on my part! Either way, hope you fix the lag.
Thanks for the info I will check that game.
Can you please gimme more info over on patreon about the bug? I think I can kinda guess what's causing it. Is it when you open and close the character sheet?
Yea, give ahegao us)))
Will be keeping an eye on this one since I am a sucker for childhood friend corruption. Also, you should add more people for her to slut herself.
I will take that into consideration! Thank you for the comment!
Game pretty short, need another dude, maybe black men? For new ending, and need add some other things, for example buy new bed, sofa, tv and etc for MC house. Maybe add spy camera? Because even when windows open in landlord room, you can't watch from different perspective.
I want scene where mc watch and fap or even cuck end. Maybe add possibility buy her costumes? And she use some in ntr and vanilla scenes.
Hello, thanks for the comment. Cameras will come later. Additional props, maybe. I would classify that as low priority for now. I will definitely take your other ideas into consideration, thank you!
I also can suggest lewd ntr streams and maybe messages from landord or gf with ntr images? Because now messages on inbox not have anything))
Sorry about the late reply, I missed this.
But all of this is in my to-do list. Thanks!
I seems to be having some issues, the game seems to be glitching out , except if I look at a specific angle
This is the first time anyone has reported anything like this. Are you sure your graphic's card is working fine?
Could you try again after restarting your PC?
I closed and opened the application and suddenly it's good, didn't even need to restarting the pc
So the game crashed when I tried playing it at first, fixed that thanks to a previous comment. now, though, for some reason everything is way brighter than any of the preview images. Like, the girl is straight up too bright for me to see her body and I'm not sure why. This is the only game I've had this problem with.
I'm sorry that's happening. The crashing issue happens if a GPU doesn't support vulkan. Which GPU are you using? Are your drivers up to date? The opengl version is just a fallback and the game probably doesn't look great in that mode.
Turns out I needed to update my drivers. Did that and both the crashing and the lighting issue were fixed.
I'm glad it's working for you now!
Hola, queria saber que truco usan los demas para ganar dinero de forma facil, llevo 6 semanas en el juego y apenas tengo 2k y sigo sin poder pagar la renta, la verdad es que no se que hacer para ganar mas dinero, no le agarro el truco. He gastado el dinero en mejorar la carisma del personaje y todo eso y siento que pierdo mas dinero debes de ganar. Algun consejo? Y tambien queria sugerir de meter a mas chicas dentro del juego y aprovechar los demas departamentos vacios, como por ejemplo meter una que sea streamer famosa y tenga la opcion de ayudar a la amiga, y puedas tambien hacerlo con ella. O tambien meter una tienda y haya una chica ahi que al igual que las demas chicas puedas progresar con esta. y Tambien agregar algun trio con estas.
To make money more easily, you have to select the sponsors every time they're available. These are under in the streaming website dashboard under the sponsors tab. These come after 1 week or so into the game, don't waste your money on upgrades until later when you have some saved up.
I will take your other suggestions into consideration, thank you :)
He jugado este juego desde el principio y más Qué cantidad le falta variedad creo que ya va siendo hora de poner un tercer personaje Como una excompañera de trabajo que viene de vez en cuando en ejemplo los miércoles qué son los días más tediosos de pasar de la semana y a veces te queda exceso de dinero y no sabes qué hacer con el es una sugerencia pero deberías hacer que el personaje venga los miércoles Con la excusa de ayudar pero solo es para verlo y ayuda al protagonista con el mantenimiento de los apartamentos Cómo sacar la basura y limpiar el suelo y para gastar el exceso de dinero con herramientas extras que ayudan mejor con la limpieza y dependiendo de qué tan bien o mal limpie el casero se la lleva a la parte de atrás del edificio para que lo *ayude* con el trabajo de mantenimiento que falta y así también se le da uso a la ventana del cuarto del protagonista Haciendo que los basureros que bloquean la entrada a peces estén ahí y a veces no y para que no se sienta tan monótono deberías poner un ciclo de día tarde y noche, día hacer el trabajo ,tarde ayudar con el edificio noche exploración
All good suggestions and I'm working on updates to improve the game one feature at a time.
Adding an additional afternoon time might cause me more headache than it's worth at the point.
Thank you so much for trying the game and leaving the comment tho!
So i download this game but it's not working for me when i try running the game it just show a transparent window then it close, either it's not compatible with my laptop or i need to do something to make it run but I'm not too sure
Hello, I think I missed this comment, so sorry about that. I think this is a result of your GPU possibly not supporting vulcan. Could you start the game with the following arguments: '--rendering-driver opengl3'
It's the E key to use, like most games. If it's not working try saving and reloading?
how much is rent bro i had 885 and still missed rent? need help asap i dont like ntr but game rlly good can someone help
edit kept playing had 2k and missed rent for week 3 aswell i dont understand how much money i need
It's 550 at first but if you keep missing, it goes down to 450 per week. It adds up if you keep missing rent, make sure you try talking to the landlord each saturday AFTER she moves in(so you only have to pay from week 2 onwards), it's explained in the tutorial and in dialogue. Actually maybe I should implement a notification with the amount so it's easier to understand. Will be done in the next update!
Hello, will the game be released for android?
Hey there! This is something I'd have to test extensively before releasing so it will probably happen after I've added major updates to the game. So maybe at some point in the coming months? If there's interest, I'll definitely expedite the process tho.
Thank you, I'll be waiting
Hmmm overall ok
I wanna point out a few things here though.
First up the ugly bastard scenes are more interesting/hotter then the MC and the girl scenes lol.
Second up the (spoilers) the bad ending gets her pregnant but the good ending points to the fact that the ugly bastard route is set in stone and that she'll fall into corruption either way?
Third up setting up what game and all that to play is pointless, so is spending more money on making the stream better as if you leave it on minimum and rando game you'll always have enough especially with the sponserships.
I get this is super early so things are placeholder and just not even there but I'll have to come back in like years at this point to see how this game has progressed. I will say you have a decent groundwork setup though and all the best.
Hey there I appreciate the feedback!
The good ending text has been slightly edited to change appropriately based on what level of affection she had with the landlord.
You're probably right about the economics and I need to balance that aspect of the game, thanks again!
well some problems with the settings u added. the volume bars are not corect.. just reducing the volume by idk 10pixels mutes the music xD
Looking into this. And I did see your message on Patreon but I couldn't reply until now. Support helped me get the page back up so it's fixed now so I will reply in a few minutes!
um can you fix me paying rent, kind of feels like I'm getting forced ntr
The logic behind the rent payment was fine, it was the dialogue that had the bug. I've uploaded a new version that should work fine now.
this makes no sense, i have 1200$ why can't i pay rent??
u need to pay the misst rent to, it donst show the coret number yet
Oh, right! There was one time when it was saturday, I had already missed rent couple times by that point (the rent was 450$) and landlord just straight up told me that I didn't have enough cash when there was actually more than needed.
Also, pretty sure a lot of money-related stuff doesn't work properly.
Courses seem to be completely free despite pricetag of 100$.
Sorry, the dialogue had a bug, it has been fixed.
I see a lot of potential. I can't wait to see what you have to add to the already solid foundation. Can't believe it was made in just two months
Thank you <3
how am i ment to start? after talking to the landlord i cant figure out what to do. cant sleep, cant open doors and cant click anything on the computer. im playing the 1.02 version
also, i cant seem to click the settings
u need to go to the pc and work. cklick 2x on the icons, confused me to xD
You gotta use the PC, it used to be double click it has been fixed to use single click, also I've added a settings menu now!
your patreon got flagt by Trust & Safety LOL.
Edit: Support helped me fix it! Page is back up now.
Yeh, I think their age verification uses AI or something and it doesn't trust that I'm 18 even though I showed my govt ID. it's kinda ridiculous because it won't even let me redo it, I'm awaiting a reply from support.
i wrote u somthing in patreon. but i gues u cant see the dms there right now xD
Your game is very cool, the story is really gripping I have rarely seen a game of this type with such good gameplay bravo to you for this work some improvements to make but seen as seen you are active in terms of updates I am sure that this game will become a classic. I just have one question, are the 3D models taken from VroidStudio?
Hey there thank you! No, they're modified koikatsu models that were animated and texture edited in blender!
Not bad, some good decisions, a lot of underdeveloped ones, clunky, a bit tedious but short and cute, left me with good feeling of your author-potential. Some critical points that I've got:
1) My gosh there should be a notification like "HEY! IT'S SATURDAY! PAY UP OR ELSE...". It's so easy to just lose track of weekdays since you're always in a loop of schedule a video->buy stuff->work->sleep->repeat, there's nothing to do otherwise anyway.
2) You plan to add more comments? Do they even matter? As of now there's almost 0 incentive to look at them.
3) Some basic dialogues for day-to-day interactions could be nice. Like you come to her place but she just ignores you, some friend she is!
4) You talk about her career (it's main gameplay, mind you!) exactly 2 times: in the beginning and when sponsorships become available. After that... So long and thanks for the fish I guess?
Overall it's not too bad for your first public game, but I feel like there's almost no reason to actually adress any of my points (except 1st one maybe? Should be pretty easy to do). You can spend enormous amounts of time polishing it, but I highly doubt there's a room for your creation to be something bigget than what it already is. My IMHO - just move on to the next thing, I'm pretty sure you can make it much better. Also, big up for making 3D eroge! Really excited to see what you and Acestudio will come up with in the future.
I appreciate the comment, friend! The first one has been added to a bugfix that I will release tomorrow. Day to day interactions are actually planned. About point 4, yah I really need to work on the dialogues and immersion. I do plan to add another character for an additional ending in game but that's for the future. And yes! I'd love to work on a different kinda game!