Looking into this. And I did see your message on Patreon but I couldn't reply until now. Support helped me get the page back up so it's fixed now so I will reply in a few minutes!
Oh, right! There was one time when it was saturday, I had already missed rent couple times by that point (the rent was 450$) and landlord just straight up told me that I didn't have enough cash when there was actually more than needed.
Also, pretty sure a lot of money-related stuff doesn't work properly.
Courses seem to be completely free despite pricetag of 100$.
how am i ment to start? after talking to the landlord i cant figure out what to do. cant sleep, cant open doors and cant click anything on the computer. im playing the 1.02 version
Edit: Support helped me fix it! Page is back up now.
Yeh, I think their age verification uses AI or something and it doesn't trust that I'm 18 even though I showed my govt ID. it's kinda ridiculous because it won't even let me redo it, I'm awaiting a reply from support.
Your game is very cool, the story is really gripping I have rarely seen a game of this type with such good gameplay bravo to you for this work some improvements to make but seen as seen you are active in terms of updates I am sure that this game will become a classic. I just have one question, are the 3D models taken from VroidStudio?
Not bad, some good decisions, a lot of underdeveloped ones, clunky, a bit tedious but short and cute, left me with good feeling of your author-potential. Some critical points that I've got:
1) My gosh there should be a notification like "HEY! IT'S SATURDAY! PAY UP OR ELSE...". It's so easy to just lose track of weekdays since you're always in a loop of schedule a video->buy stuff->work->sleep->repeat, there's nothing to do otherwise anyway.
2) You plan to add more comments? Do they even matter? As of now there's almost 0 incentive to look at them.
3) Some basic dialogues for day-to-day interactions could be nice. Like you come to her place but she just ignores you, some friend she is!
4) You talk about her career (it's main gameplay, mind you!) exactly 2 times: in the beginning and when sponsorships become available. After that... So long and thanks for the fish I guess?
Overall it's not too bad for your first public game, but I feel like there's almost no reason to actually adress any of my points (except 1st one maybe? Should be pretty easy to do). You can spend enormous amounts of time polishing it, but I highly doubt there's a room for your creation to be something bigget than what it already is. My IMHO - just move on to the next thing, I'm pretty sure you can make it much better. Also, big up for making 3D eroge! Really excited to see what you and Acestudio will come up with in the future.
I appreciate the comment, friend! The first one has been added to a bugfix that I will release tomorrow. Day to day interactions are actually planned. About point 4, yah I really need to work on the dialogues and immersion. I do plan to add another character for an additional ending in game but that's for the future. And yes! I'd love to work on a different kinda game!
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well some problems with the settings u added. the volume bars are not corect.. just reducing the volume by idk 10pixels mutes the music xD
Looking into this. And I did see your message on Patreon but I couldn't reply until now. Support helped me get the page back up so it's fixed now so I will reply in a few minutes!
um can you fix me paying rent, kind of feels like I'm getting forced ntr
The logic behind the rent payment was fine, it was the dialogue that had the bug. I've uploaded a new version that should work fine now.
this makes no sense, i have 1200$ why can't i pay rent??
u need to pay the misst rent to, it donst show the coret number yet
Oh, right! There was one time when it was saturday, I had already missed rent couple times by that point (the rent was 450$) and landlord just straight up told me that I didn't have enough cash when there was actually more than needed.
Also, pretty sure a lot of money-related stuff doesn't work properly.
Courses seem to be completely free despite pricetag of 100$.
Sorry, the dialogue had a bug, it has been fixed.
I see a lot of potential. I can't wait to see what you have to add to the already solid foundation. Can't believe it was made in just two months
Thank you <3
how am i ment to start? after talking to the landlord i cant figure out what to do. cant sleep, cant open doors and cant click anything on the computer. im playing the 1.02 version
also, i cant seem to click the settings
u need to go to the pc and work. cklick 2x on the icons, confused me to xD
You gotta use the PC, it used to be double click it has been fixed to use single click, also I've added a settings menu now!
your patreon got flagt by Trust & Safety LOL.
Edit: Support helped me fix it! Page is back up now.
Yeh, I think their age verification uses AI or something and it doesn't trust that I'm 18 even though I showed my govt ID. it's kinda ridiculous because it won't even let me redo it, I'm awaiting a reply from support.
i wrote u somthing in patreon. but i gues u cant see the dms there right now xD
Your game is very cool, the story is really gripping I have rarely seen a game of this type with such good gameplay bravo to you for this work some improvements to make but seen as seen you are active in terms of updates I am sure that this game will become a classic. I just have one question, are the 3D models taken from VroidStudio?
Hey there thank you! No, they're modified koikatsu models that were animated and texture edited in blender!
Not bad, some good decisions, a lot of underdeveloped ones, clunky, a bit tedious but short and cute, left me with good feeling of your author-potential. Some critical points that I've got:
1) My gosh there should be a notification like "HEY! IT'S SATURDAY! PAY UP OR ELSE...". It's so easy to just lose track of weekdays since you're always in a loop of schedule a video->buy stuff->work->sleep->repeat, there's nothing to do otherwise anyway.
2) You plan to add more comments? Do they even matter? As of now there's almost 0 incentive to look at them.
3) Some basic dialogues for day-to-day interactions could be nice. Like you come to her place but she just ignores you, some friend she is!
4) You talk about her career (it's main gameplay, mind you!) exactly 2 times: in the beginning and when sponsorships become available. After that... So long and thanks for the fish I guess?
Overall it's not too bad for your first public game, but I feel like there's almost no reason to actually adress any of my points (except 1st one maybe? Should be pretty easy to do). You can spend enormous amounts of time polishing it, but I highly doubt there's a room for your creation to be something bigget than what it already is. My IMHO - just move on to the next thing, I'm pretty sure you can make it much better. Also, big up for making 3D eroge! Really excited to see what you and Acestudio will come up with in the future.
I appreciate the comment, friend! The first one has been added to a bugfix that I will release tomorrow. Day to day interactions are actually planned. About point 4, yah I really need to work on the dialogues and immersion. I do plan to add another character for an additional ending in game but that's for the future. And yes! I'd love to work on a different kinda game!